Quiet Poetry Lounge : TREACHEROUS PATH

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Blkthunder, May 10, 2006.

  1. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have given up on love..It’s a treacherous path
    Give me four walls..To share in my laughs
    Shadows haunted my vision
    But you freed me of inhibition
    By your light I was set free
    But the candle burned low .. now I can’t see
    Memories give me hope of what might exist
    I drowned in your eyes but awoke in bliss
    How many have died from the honey of your kiss??
    You are the perfumed rose
    Whose sent made me doze
    Only God knows why I now have these dreams
    Sleep with me in paradise and become my queen
    (co)mrks'06
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    she can't say no to this !
    awesome flow
     
  3. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow i like your style poet do continue to flo on. we must collab sometimes.:hearts2:
     
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