Black Poetry : ...traversed...

LiLi

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Aug 30, 2002
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tree, tree, tractor, tree, cow
crimson and amber
burst
as you skim my thigh
sweetly
pleasure so intense it
hurts
fingers arrest nipples
briefly
lovers words i
curse
kiss lips so
gently
as you enter in slowly
first
i beg for this
softly
body shudders of
thirst
desire's overwhelming
mostly
before you ever stroke my
curves
man's breath felt
closely...

moves pensive
observed
fantasy's hightened
ghostly
white to blue flame
submersed
syncopation found
freely
honey cream springs flesh
alert
eyes close
chastely
body thrust
terse
hands grip
tightly
bodies resolve...

traversed
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2002 ALL ME
 
i dont know if you like my writting or not, so i dont mean to offend you but the way you write somehow reminds me of my own style

i really like this

i like the way you break up the lines reminds me of what i
would do with a poem like this

dont get me wrong i dont like it cause it reminds me of
my writing i like it because it is a good poem

kepp um comin lili
 

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