Khasm13 : travelling II...

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  1. Khasm13

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    blood vessels in my eyes swell
    as if bout to pop
    the world swirls in slow motion
    blurred movements are sloth like but never stop
    blinders are secured solidly so my vision is cropped
    all of my senses are mopped
    up like dirty germ infected water
    i'm sitting here staring at
    father-time’s daughter
    that’s when she caught the
    astral plane and shifted it to my frame
    locked inside a tron video game
    purple lions graze on hard drives
    and live life without a mane
    without a name
    i pray for a release out of this game
    this women has turned out to be my bane
    rotating warps wash over this world in wheels
    as pliant structures feel the force and squeal
    i walk thru an ever-changing kaleidoscope of valleys and hills
    my binary boots step over gridlines
    and bogged down berserkers as they kneel
    logical tree diagrams tower over me and steal
    my thoughts and the way that i feel
    a bronze beggar passes by
    letting out a shrill
    as he sees a hairy hexagon harpoon a hooker
    with intent to kill
    plankton swims by eating up whales
    as a meal
    am i here for real?
    or is this a dream surreal?
    i watch as computer chips swarm and form grotesque beings
    then i notice my skin starting to peel
    i travel miles upon miles
    with each mile my skin falling off to reveal
    wires and circuits that an alien chose to build
    a dripping tangerine scene smothered in cream
    overloads my optics knocking out my afro sheen
    what does all of this mean?
    should i ask professor keen bean?
    undecided
    i travel some more
    even places uninvited
    high-stepping harpies holding a trident
    but one of them threw a bug
    and my motherboard ignited
    my memory is now crippled and slighted
    by faster networks that put my cpu
    in a world of hurt
    but still i travel on
    floating on top of acid seas
    directed by a metropolis weez
    bubble shaped batteries turn into
    an instant tease bouncing on their knees
    that’s when the third optic identified some keys
    my exposed body exhibits the wear and tear
    of existing in a living nightmare
    my decrepit hand reaches for the keys
    in hope that i could now be free
    magically this convulsing world is truly seen
    a test for which most mortals are reamed
    i gaze at the keys in my possession that glitter and gleam
    but still i am left with questions
    what does everything i’ve seen really mean
    these inquires overpower my being
    and cause me to short circuit
    shuttling me back into my tortured dreams
    maybe i should have asked
    professor keen bean:confused: :confused: :confused: :confused:
     
  2. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm not quite sure I understood this, however it had me hooked!
    I never sit around for the long ones, and this has me interested from the first line, to the second, all the way till the end.
     
  3. Khasm13

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    thanks alize...
    not everything is meant to be understood...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya flow today is wall banging
    dis was awesome
     
  5. PlayWitItPimp05

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    Sounds like a dream surreal to me....
    This piece kinda sounds like a classic
    Twilight Zone....
    Well, make that very well, written.

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  6. Locust

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    you should be in def jam poety or somethang
    this is very imaginative your level of cognition is over genius
    ya skills are quicker than a pentium 4
    time to decode this computer
    cuz i'm feelin this flo
    aight
    ...Bombs over Babylon
     
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    Khasm, you know u get maaad props from me...Locust has a
    great "eye" for unbelievable talent, I see.

    This scribes got ultimate tyteness!
    Peace
     
  8. Khasm13

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    thanks fam...
    i had to dig this from da crates
    peace
    khasm
     
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    Hey Khasm13
    this is a creative
    flow of favor
    wonderful
    Peace
     
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    and though it seems like u speak in code
    u jus in Khasm mode
    breakin down walls of illogicality
    calculate the truth behind the walls of fraudulence
    i have faith in ya competence
    biological disease
    has taken ease
    in the minds of many
    but within ya scribe i dont see any
    u made it plain to see
    things aint always what they seem to be

    i hear u :)
     
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