Black Poetry : travellin

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  1. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    I’ve been travelling a long time now..
    moving from inner caves ..
    amazed within the maze…
    cobwebs clinging in every nook…
    little fires smoldering just in the wind..
    myriad forms and shapes caress and rough my inner being…
    this cavernous self- this rounded jagged eartH..
    I sit wanting to express, stay within the forms we know as living...

    Hoping to touch base now and again with the spirited ONE..
    suddenly I have been felled by a tree
    or drop way down some hidden hole within this darkened place…
    I must look see…
    The pain of it all.
    .the dry tears and the garbled laughter…
    Diversions
    Spirit lead me toward The path


    (c)ncn2009
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Our travels, our experiences, they shape who we are, and in the end, we hope to be on the path that God intended. You are one of the masters of saying so much, with so few words. Welcome back poetess.
     
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    the journey that we take is unique...
    depends on what we seek....
    keep pennin poet...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so often we venture a path take a journey into what we should be or do and hope it's
    the right thing that was made for us ...I feel ya on this travellin note......
     
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    deep, glad you traveled this way

    ANY encounter with The DEEP

    Being worthwhile
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    $$rich$$khasm13-1poetsoughtwatzinaname!!
    POETS
    may the DEVINE bless you...creative wonders that you are...
    you keep encouraging me...keep helping me continue...
    thank ya
    love ya...
     
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    Likewise sis likewise......welcome.
     
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    Sister deepy :read:

    I loved reading from you again :)

    Are you a storyteller? Your pieces have a narrative read and its a delightful one. It takes a skillful pen to be a good narrator :)

    much props sister poetess :read:
     
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