Khasm13 : traveling III...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    from da top of skyscrappers
    to the streets filled with swirling papers
    i travel past the phonies and the fakers
    trouble makers and loot takers
    cause gingerbreadmen bakers get melted by the cheese graters
    chillin on elevators actin like haters thinkin they are greater...
    what is going on?
    what the uck is going on?
    the congested pathways are filled with cats thinkin wrong
    mentals durdy like water from a bong
    bouncin over sad songs like ping pong for far too long
    of a time...afraid of the lights shine so they climb da vine
    the eyes of strangers remind the line of malnourished minds
    that beast do not walk on their hind
    legs...and that a man that begs is more delicate then a dozen eggs
    in a room with unhappy feds runnin low on meds
    in these streets chinese cats walk with dreds on their heads
    breakdancing with keds and pumas from da sheds
    da dregs of this planet roam free unable to see
    past the next day and it's a tragedy that the saddle be
    fallin off...leave'n souls as a casuality while the faculty
    tries to battle me...
    what is going on?
    what the uck is going on?
    all these fools scampering like ants in lil hong kong
    lookin stupid like a midget with a giant dong
    emeresed in a preverse visual starburst
    da durst is to stay away from the scurge of da day
    and keep them out my way or at least keep them at bay
    no matta what dem say it's not ok to lay
    in corruption...my eternal essense abduction is da devils construction
    what sun is the right one?
    what gun makes the most run?
    how dumb is one who chases hot buns no matter where they are from
    and how dumb is one who shakes hot buns to attract all...includin scum
    the streets that i run i don't see one
    i see infinity...



    silly me...
     
  2. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    allright khasm...
    rich piece...and
    thank you for the last line
    otherwise i would have stayed in some
    addled questioning place..loving the piece...but
    infinity..
    thanks..
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you never let me down..love reading you
    ya be taken there each time :wink: ...tight drop...
    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this came off so smooth and tyteeeeeeee
    u always come correct
     
  5. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brother Khasm,

    This was so tight! I loved each line. :deal: You keep bringing it
     
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    Sometimes what one sees in their travels seems like it must go on and on forever, but does it? Tight drop poet.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah what the uck is goin on *giggles* :D

    I remember the first travelin poem you dropped...

    I had to go back for that MULTIPLE affect ....*chills* :)
     
  8. angelicsage

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    Brother...you leave me speechless :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:

    as long as you keep writing like this...
    I'll always be down here, lol...:bowdown:
    Much love,
    Sage
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as always this was tyte...
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The luv didn't travel far enough on this one...back up it goes...
     
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