Black Poetry : Trapped

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THEONE, Feb 3, 2005.

  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Trapped as a Feeling


    :insane: Time
    Ticking
    Tocking
    Tension
    Trapped!

    Ruthless
    Relentless
    Rampaging
    Rats?

    Assaulted
    Assassins
    Agitated
    Angry! :whip:

    Painless
    Persistant
    Persueing
    Prayingly! :run:

    Povertied
    Pittyfilled
    Passionate
    People! :happens:

    Entrapped
    Enraged
    Entangled
    EQAUL?

    Destiny
    Deprived
    Degraded
    Debased!

    Trapped is what we where, our Identities erased!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    as we find self through new hope
    a different life beings searching
    seeking answers to release the
    souls , mental mindz of a trap
    feeling we rise again

    this was nicely done and the message hit home THEONE.
     
  3. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thnks Rich, Always a pleasure to get a read from you
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A people, our people, treated as though we weren't even people. If they could've broken our spirits, they would have. This definitely got my attention poet, flow on with this.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like the way you posed this it was deep and strong flow head on poet nice work indeed...Angel
     
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