Black Poetry : Trapped!..

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  1. SOULSTAR

    SOULSTAR Active Member MEMBER

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    Hi everyone....

    TRAPPED

    Emancipation or incarceration, you tell me what’s the situation?
    Are we free or imprisoned do we make that decision?

    Trapped in a world full of preconceptions way too many for me to mention!
    I got this feeling like I’m in detention being scrutinized as if I!! Need correction.
    I want to make my own decision in the way I like! …Down to my own precision.
    I need to dictate my own ****! I can’t put up with these conditions.
    Life is to be lived it aint no competition.
    Trying to be like everyone else so there aint no criticism!!!

    Emancipation or incarceration, now you tell me!
    What’s the situation?​
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi:wave:
    i am telling you
    this is so ON
    wonderful drop
    keep scribing
    Peace
    BlueWater
     
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    emancipation or incarceration...

    a negation
    that speaks of our relation
    to years and years of
    hateration
    in a juvenile nation
    IN THE COMMON
    we are not
    FREE TO BE
    for we are without
    POWER
    therefore
    we are under the
    CONTROL
    of the order
    to be slaughtered
    at their command
    or
    damned
    by their hand
    still
    so many of us fail to
    understand
    the circumstances of our
    circumstance

    SLAVES TO THE SYSTEM
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Greetings! I am straight feelin this piece...
    Do you do spoken wordz cuz these lines were talking 2 me 4 sho!

    Baller your addition is hot 2!

    PEACE UNITY LOVE PROSPERITY ONENESS
    2fish
     
  5. ille$t poete$$

    ille$t poete$$ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hot hot hot

    :bowdown: gurl this srt8 bangin! right on point! this is fire...*hands u extingusher*lol its for next time when write yo paper do catch fire! lol keep up this flamin scribin!
    HAWLA
    *1 luV*
    -tha ille$t :peace:
     
  6. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful way you voiced that...
    freedom IZ the latest choice

    more, please

    /antar
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome to destee.com
    feeling this flow
    hope to see more
    Peace
    Angel
     
  8. SOULSTAR

    SOULSTAR Active Member MEMBER

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    Thanks

    Thank you all so much for the positive feed back it is well appreciated..

    One..xxxx :love:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I choose emancipation for sure, truly feeling this piece. I loved the way you laid this, welcome to Destee!!
     
  10. SOULSTAR

    SOULSTAR Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for such a warm welcome i am glad to be a part of the family if ya'll have me..lol;).....

    One..xxxx
     
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