Quiet Poetry Lounge : trapped within

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticly_yours, Mar 5, 2004.

  1. poeticly_yours

    poeticly_yours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I keep my feelings locked inside
    externally I'm in disguise
    deep down is where my spirit lies
    which holds the treasures that I hide
    who you see now isn't real
    you don't know how i truly feel
    all that appears to you
    is what's allowed to come to view
    My life is shown, just like a play
    I play a part for everyday
    I plaster on this happy face
    When deep inside i feel such pain
    I don't know how to find the key
    that the breaks the chain that's binding me
    I need to find a true release
    a way that I can just be free
    and find the girl thats truly me
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    release by faith
    flow and vent
    seek within deep
    i feel ya
    open ya
    mind , spirit & soul
    allow the heart to
    move and in the mirror
    u will fine the answer!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The true you is in there, just let it flow free just like your poetry. Keep flowing.
     
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    cojamalik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very vry nice
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa

    This one blew my mind.... :spinn: it is so beautiful.
    I was reallt feelin you poet...really...going thru a similar situation...
    well, good luck to the both of us : )
    Nice one Poet...very nice!
     
  6. poeticly_yours

    poeticly_yours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for all the encouraging words. I'm glad you all felt my poem.
     
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