Quiet Poetry Lounge : Trapped In A Tear

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, May 23, 2001.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My whole heart is trapped
    inside a tear drop
    that has formed
    on the inside of my
    soul
    and I don't know
    how to stop
    the tear
    from
    d
    e
    s
    c
    e
    n
    d
    i
    n
    g

    I wish you could
    catch that tear
    inside the palm
    of your hand
    before it hits
    the floor and
    breaks--
    with my heart inside
    of it ...

    Save the love
    I have for you
    before
    it dies an
    untimely death
    as I
    begin to
    cry~~


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ummm...

    Know this feeling all too well.
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Afri

    I know just what you mean...!

    Thanks for the read!
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow....

    That was deep...all that held in one tear drop. I refuse to cry...for i know that if they flow...they will go by and by....

    Wonderfully done N2...Wonderfully said....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i've inside this place and felt the emotions
    this spill out to canvas like water
     
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    I Felt This Piece....Very Deep...Keep It Up
     
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    Sweet... Sweet... Sweet!!!
     
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