Black Poetry : Translate and don't be late

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Dec 14, 2008.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Understand
    What I am about to say to you
    In my mind it's clear
    Interpret it for it's worth

    Don't take it out of context
    It is direct I know it is
    It is worth the risk to say to you

    The treasure you stand to give
    To me
    To who ever, you hold
    Close to your heart :love:
    In your mind, close in body to your soul.

    I want to make love to you
    I want you to want me too.

    For two can make magic
    Spark a new thing
    Bring about something
    Only two can bring

    Making love!​


    Je veux faire amour

    French...http://babelfish.yahoo.com/
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awwwwww yes i can relate
     
  3. lovealexandria

    lovealexandria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A great poem about wanting to make a connection with those you love
     
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    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm sure the message will come across loud and clear
    great write
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hopefully this message will be strongly considered with the sincerity in which is was given. Feeling this indeed.
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes I like this...making love to the one you love ( not just some random ) is such a mind body soul connection.No otha place in the world, one would ratha be.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Hodee...

    :wave:
    I totally enjoyed this
    Its soul tender and loving.
    And to think I almost missed it!:)


    Great write... cool title too!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
  8. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You MaddSistahlyLove!
    Soul is special to me, for it
    Because it connects all my thoughts, and thinking
    Clarifys my view, beliefs and opinion.

    Thoughts ===>and opinions share the same view
    But opinion allows the change in outlook.
    That holds the future.

    Je veux faire amour​
     
  9. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hodee,

    There's just sumpin so special about a man whose
    not afraid to pour out his heart for his...baby.

    romantically done, poet.


    epiphany:heart:
     
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