Black Poetry : Tranquility

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Dec 6, 2006.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So captivated the scene of nature
    That natural blend that surrounds us,
    Lives with us
    Directing us into a common peace
    The tranquility found in the curves of the mountains
    Spoke to me
    In the silent of the mist
    The rocks do speak

    Ashe
     
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    Short..
    sweet and deeply felt.
    wcb.... :heart:
    I always miss your words....
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow ! this spoke to me as i look upon da mountains
     
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    This piece reminded me of how your flows tended to express beauty through nature. Nature speaks to us in so many ways. Flow some more Bluewater.
     
  5. Bluewater

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    Hi Sister PoeticManifesta :wave:
    Thank you for the love my sister
    I miss you also
    We are all looking forward to reading your flows sis 2 :)
    thank you for the welcome

    Hi Brother $$RICH$$ :wave:
    Isn't it so sweet, it a high
    that is like no others..
    Thank you dear brother for the love

    Hi Sister Waz :wave:
    Thank you sis
    I'm slowly warming up
    It's been a long time since I took the time
    To take in all of God Blessing.
    Thank you dear sis for the love

    Thank you all so much for sharing your love
    with me.

    Peace & Love
     
  6. GHETTOAMBITION

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    this was nice and i felt ur meanin of this bluewater
    the rocks of mountains do speak of history and of creativity
     
  7. j'hiah

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    lz that Venus???

    i love this one...
    so serene and naturally interceptive...

    jh.

    the year is '07, the outro coming soon
     
  8. Bluewater

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    Hi GHETTOAMBITION :wave:
    Yes that is so true sis, it speaks of time past
    and of times to comes, its the peace we seek.
    Thank you so much for your love

    Hi j'hiah :wave:
    Yes it is Venus..:) you're so wise
    Thank you dear brother for your love and feeling the peace

    Peace & Love
     
  9. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    thank you

    how beautifull
    ...like your name .. such a graceful flow....
     
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    Thank you so much, I woke up this morning needing inspiration to get out of the bed and I found it here, beautiful.
     
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