Black Poetry : TRANQUILITY !!

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I stood in the mist
    all alone yet all around
    me life was struggling
    for existence capside
    at the reason of helm
    the elkhorn ran rampant
    returning to earth that
    nourish da age past
    standing in cluster, slowly
    they hung head to hide da
    pretty faces of beauty
    as it lay cross the water
    cool sprinkle of da pond
    trickles looking out to sea
    open mind floats in da river
    the forest loom da web
    bedded in years of forgotten
    brilliant orbs of souls
    un-covered promises made
    hearts drif hint of majesty
    still cling
    i stood and glazed at the
    beauty of nature
    felt all the love in me flowing
    i heard my self whisper gently
    feeling the peace in da land
    of TRANQUILITY
    oh' great spirits make me
    worthy of thy creation . :read:
     
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    i likes the way you brought this out
    very nice read i had to read it twice
    it read with ease and a calmness
    nice one likes...Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u very much Angel......mind rumbling and i pen it down !
     
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    well if i may say
    your ramble is a masterpiece
    continue on your drift
    love it!!!
     
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    make me wrothy so i made feel
    the flow of Tranquity
    very deep
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    This was a peaceful read, makes you feel like you're one with nature, very serene.
     
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    in transistion blue da depth of my inner soul floating out
    Thank u sistah

    Thank u watz indeed from da depth of my mind it was rumbling
     
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    this was so visual and mystically beautiful... :sand:

    Very nice flow!
     
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    thank u sistah mind was rumbling
     
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    As I was reading this, there was a certain kind of peace that came over me...flowed like I was on airwaves...wonderful piece this is and thanks for blowing it our way.
     
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