Black Poetry : Tranquility

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    happy....

    thats how i felt...
    backyard...lying on the grass...
    feeling...not thinking...
    feeling....
    the clouds s...l...o...w...l...y
    lathargicly....linger past me...
    making shadows grace my face...

    i loved the way he did what he did
    how he did...(lol)
    fingers finding a blade of grass
    trees swaying...swaying...

    eyes closing....
    ki roaming through
    the channels of my body
    i....was at a place
    where i could do...me....

    sepia eyes watch me...
    studing the textures of my
    body....breathe, seeing, remembering...

    new life grabs me....

    copyright 2004, all rights reserved
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    body & soul .....
    lovin ya flava flow on
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You

    take me deep story,I always love the way you floE..
    Nice...nice indeed.
     
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    nice flow
    likes
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  6. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There was such peace in those words you penned...keep the flow going.
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Really nice flow Im loving it
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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