Black Poetry : Trails (for LibertyLady)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Apr 18, 2004.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u used to cy tears or pain at night...
    He would watch u, slumped over...
    seemingly crippled....
    ur soul would whine..
    "Please Father do not forsake me!!"
    yet He does not...
    He holds u in his arms and says simply...
    "i'm here...."
    " i wil be ur strenght don't worry"


    God is ur strenght...
    God is ur fortress...
    God is the lover of ur soul...
    God is a u wil ever need...

    in his arms u will be safe...
    and someday he will look at u and smile...

    P.S Libery please read pslams 91...
    i hope u feel better...i know its not much but...
    i hope it helps...
    :heart:
    -story

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  2. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    kee......i,m crying out sofly but strong here.....


    (people looking at me strange here at this cafe)


    you wouldent survive my embrasse........if you were here right now story....






    sister...(i dont know who you are but it doesnt matter you are soul that heard my crying and pains in my trails)



    I,m telling you gods gonna bless you for this..(cause he is always watching)

    and i will never never forget you ..

    i will never forget the people who were there on moments of deep disapointments of grieve....they are carved in my heart..
    even if they have left the stage.....

    i will never forget those moments ....



    aww putting a heart down here right now is not enough .....


    put i put it down anyway ....:heart:



    Lovelibertylady..
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very well done story
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u on ya way sistah to recovery
    story this was very sweet and felt
    da pain will leave i feel ya sistah sage...
     
  5. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm just tryin to do what i can...i heard u in pain, and i just wanted to help in any way i can...i hope u feel better soon..and we don't look at chu strange...u have alwayz been welcome here...i know u don't know me..but hey..i wish u well...
    :heart:
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The story, that was so beautiful. What just seems like a little bit of care at the time, can mean a world of difference to a person. Keep caring as you do, it will come back to you in blessings.
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks watz...i try to make a difference....
    :heart:
    -story
     
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