Black Poetry : Tragedy of Commonality

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Jul 14, 2003.

  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "But this spirit/curse cannot be harnessed"

    ONCE AGAIN...HOT HOT HOT!

    Feelin this piece. What else should I expect though?:)
     
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    tyte flow dis was too sweet
     
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    Alize, Thank you girl....your always such a ray of sunshine, Glad u feeling this one.

    Rich, thanks for dropping a line, glad u felt the sweetness through the structure which doesn't sound so sweet but is.
     
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    girl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is wonderful:D!
     
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    This is deep Angelicsage... The way you scribed this one was lyrical, and different.

    " O’ the tragedy, the day will be
    When I, imprisoned, bearing “commonality” "

    All given what the other has. "O the tragedy. " Unless your granted Rapture.
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lovely, so glad your feeling me, seeing how your recently married
    and all....Mrs. Kenny

    I wasn't sure that anyone would understand what it meant,
    --- a free spirit about to be wed and the fear that has overcome
    her, of being "common" regular...and her asking him is he willing
    to love her beyond the imperfections....even her "free spirit",
    because being common, for her, is a tragedy.

    Hodee - Thank you for seeing the meaning in this piece...
    the union of a man and woman really is rapture but a big step
    for someone who is a free spirit, so unique, afraid of being
    common.
     
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    I love... the way... you... put this... down! (wit ya bad self)

    An ounce of precaution is worth a pound of cure-
     
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    much disdain
    for plain jane
    and cats following the same
    game
    they all are links
    in the same chain
    while i remain
    on my own plane
    regularly changing the lanes
    cause commonality
    is strickly for the insane
    and for those too weak
    to challange life's pain
    peace
    khasm
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, 1poetsought...I also...love...the way..."you"...put it down. Much luv, Angelic




    To the mundane domain
    With Plane Jane and Ordinary Shane
    Uh huh!!! Excuse me but I must abstain
    Can’t be caught in the “commonality” game
    Unique individuality is what I strive to attain
    The freeness of my spirit, cerebrally ingrained
    Thank you “Khasm”………………..
    For the unique flow, here framed…you always maintain.
    Much Luv, Angeli
     
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