Black Poetry : Traffic

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Tantrum, Sep 28, 2006.

  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My mind is stuck in traffic
    Harrassed for what comes out of the plastic/
    Locked away like some common criminal
    14 days they gave was the minimal/
    Im lost going sideways its synical
    Freeways rotate highways its typical/
    Like people say im not black but bi-racial
    Its racisit thats why I smack fire facial/
    So many intersections loosing my patients
    My words need time to catch-my mind is crAZY impatient/
    How so many people get lost in the system
    Inoccent victims stuck in traffic-part of lifes mission/
    Traffic
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i feel ya here bruh !
     
  3. Aaliyahmonet

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    Welcome Back

    Welcome back Tantrum. Nowadays these police out here be hiding in designated areas, and even though you aint speeding or anything, they still try to pull ya over. Its good to see ya out though, stay blessed.



    AM
     
  4. Khasm13

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    the jump out boyz are some byatches...
    tyte scribe sir...

    one love
    khasm
     
  5. ibrahim

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    I feel ya bro tantrum
    Sorry bout that.
    Welcome back.
     
  6. rapchild

    rapchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa now dat was some real shhh
    when i was readin it like rap
    ur poetry is real.

    peace.
     
  7. PoeticManifesta

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    I bet next time you drive
    youll still push the limt,
    Heres my advice,
    if you aint got the bat mobile,
    then cruise,
    ride...
    float..
    speed feeds the need..
    but the states and counties are indeed..
    steadily full of greed..
    so surely you see..
    that behind iron bars is no place,
    for such a sweet lil face :x:
    Let not history repeat itself,
    because its bad for your health..
    and that my dear is your wealth!
     
  8. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WELCOME BACK!!!!!

    I missed you Tabtrum....Sorry to hear about your
    little trip. Thats all behind you now. Your scribe was nice.

    Much Luv
     
  9. Ikoro

    Ikoro Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    w00t.

    That's a nice write, brotha!! Reminded me of "Fight Until The End", by IT and that other kat.

    Keep it flowin.

    ~Ikoro
     
  10. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just so nice to be reading you again!!!
    Love this.
    :hearts3: :hearts3: :hearts3:
     
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