Black Poetry : ...trade it all.

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U make a sistah wanna
    trade it all…(& I do mean
    every **** thing!!
    )
    in order to open-ly pursue
    the always&foreva
    possibilities of… U
    & I… won’t try to deny
    the fact that I have “friends

    but…

    from the moment that U
    entered my personal space
    your aura seemed to
    erase/replace/negate
    any growing curiosity toward
    other men & I’ve slipped
    in(to) an overwhelming state
    of CompletelyStuckOnU
    (& I’ve gotta follow thru)

    so…

    I’ve decided to trade it all
    from this day forward—
    I won’t be caught giving out
    my digits & I no longer wish
    to clever-ly exhibit an air of
    availability… when anotha
    brotha tries to step to me
    I’m no longer taking
    no-strings attached” trips
    or accepting small gifts
    from my ex… instead
    (total-ly feelin' what Whitney said)
    I’m saving all my love 4U

    Darlin’…

    U make a sistah wanna
    trade it all… willing-ly
    & I know this may be
    hard to conceive... but
    (dig this) even tho’
    you’re not “perfect”…
    (so to speak) my heart
    believes...
    you’re perfect for me.

    © SunShyneOrygynals 2002, all rights reserved
     
  2. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA,

    It's all **** good!
    But don't go tradin
    your gift to scribe,
    that would leave us
    high and dry.

    Scribeallaboutitgirl!


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  3. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Sista! My Sista!!

    OooooooWeeeeee!!
    U done did it again!!
    I know u feel me!
    Dayummm...Anotha one please, cause this is Gooooood!! Very Good!!:toast:
     
  4. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok,ok,ok...
    ni, that shoulda' been some collab sh*t!
    i'm hatin', yeh, i'm hatin'. but tyte nonetheless.
    made me smile at your perfekshun.

    hw
     
  5. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    perfect is in the eyes of the beholder
     
  6. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tell him!!!!!!... woowee, do I know bout dis heah! :D

    Luv-deded dis un, sista Elayne!

    Thanks

    SWT
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What? Trade it all? Well I got six magical beans and Jack will never know!!! You got mad skills EB, absolutely tight.
     
  8. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AlwaysThanks!


    Bro'Man. ...mad skills? nah... dat would be You, sir!
    thank you for takin' the time to show some luv! :heart:

    Shadee. :D ...thank You!! i'm glad you felt the vibe
    reverberatin' offa this one! :)

    Shazzy. you are 100% correct... that's why i made
    it clear that he's perfect for ME. thanks for the read! :)

    hi-wa you know you ain't hatin'!! but thanks for
    sayin' it anyway!! :D i'm crazy 'bout you kid! :lol: :heart:

    Rashad. you are a mess!! :lol: i'm glad you liked...
    'cause you know dats important to me!! :heart:

    CoCo. i guess i shoulda added in small print dat i
    ain't tradin' the poetry! :lol: thanks for the read! :)

    Sherrie. do the **** thang... i shall!! :D thanks
    for stoppin' by! & i STILL love you sister dear!! :heart:
     
  9. MsBerry_98

    MsBerry_98 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sunny E... as always you are on point. :heart: in' the way you do what it is you do.

    :heart: in' you as well!! (Hate I missed you last week :cry: )
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MsB. thanks for the read lil sis! i missed you last week...
    but i know you were with me in spirit! :) i had sooo much
    fun! (i think i kinda like dat supa-star ****! LOL) itsallLove.
     
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