Black Poetry : Tracks of my tears of luv

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I gave u the moon & starz above
    I gave the tears of gentle love
    I gave u under da candles at night
    I gave u da sun to a rising day light

    The tears i've shed was my love
    for u and all our hopes to be true
    my heart is here for u
    all u need to do is ask
    but somehow u feel it's a task
    i close my eyez and vision
    cascading in a submission
    within da glance as i prance
    alone da way seeking da
    lovin chance to dance wit u
    my beloveth in romance

    My glow of candles flick da flame
    as ya body call my name , claim
    the souls we hold keeping the
    bliss feverish from cold
    my tears run in pools of love
    it was a blessing from above
    i've given u the beauty for free
    all i ask is u give ya heart to me
    it's like the beginning and end
    yesterday , today & tomorrow
    i sing da song weep cry & moan
    for da moment of u and how my
    love is true i know da mistakes
    i feel ya pain but don't turn ya
    head lay in shame nor blame my
    humble clash as tyme surely pass

    I've vow my heart to u
    i gave my love for u
    i weep in grace for u
    coz i truely love u and
    it's trace in da tracks of my tears
    the wave is faith i so pose
    my loveth ur my jewel da rare rose
    compromise u my soulful bliss
    to be felt inside a kiss
    and let us continue our journey
    and be together forever warmly
    as we look back cross da maze
    setting a new faze of history as
    I caress, confess , comfort and
    love
    hug & hold u close
    rub u fulfill u da most
    kiss u up a toast
    coz we to be and feel complete
    hope u feel da same
    as u call my name this love of me
    is unique and free if u really see
    u can knoweth of thee
    don't know what it take to sho
    my heart body and soul in da fold
    for u and that i truely love u too
    just open ya heart and know
    feel it beloveth in my flow
    as i stroll one last time to sho
    ur my sweet love divine in shine
    extending the energy as a healer
    intensely feeling da beauty of
    morals we pose and a message
    of marriage composed
    our day is near see
    in da
    trackz
    of my
    TEARZ :deal:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    More and more
    I see and feel
    As you heal
    Your love is true
    Oh I see
    A man sweet and meek
    Beauty he his form
    More and more
    I know your charm
    As I wipe all them tears
    And erased my fears
    Openly free as the wind
    I come to you…
    By your side…
    Upon the starz I call your name
    In harmony we dance
    Speak your mind
    For I hear
    And I see
    More and more
    I confess my love unto you
    Let me go here with you….
    I hold your moon in my heart
    As your starz lay in my soul
    And your love…is beyond the orbs
    Perfect submission
    Under candlelight I hold you dear
    The rising of day your my sun
    all you ask is I give ma heart to you
    and I have….it's like the beginning and end
    yesterday today and tomorrow
    forever more…within my life
    I give you me
    .........I give you me
     
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    Tracks of your tears
    flow freely and expand
    causing footprints to be
    imprinted in the sand
    she has felt it all
    she has hoped it was true
    for the love is truly
    uniquely of you
    Sent from the heaven's
    on high, this love
    is sent and blessed
    from high above
    Higher than the
    North Star
    Higher than the throne
    where you are
    seated, a King
    of Nubian royalty
    as plain as anyone
    can see
    professing it so
    that everyone hears
    My dear you have
    brought the lady to tears
    May her tears and yours
    now mingle together
    and join in the truth
    that seals you forever
    She's heard you before
    as she hears you now
    Never before has there
    been such a heartfelt vow
    She hopes it's crystal
    clear to you as well
    She loves you so,
    can't you tell?
    As lasting as the sands
    of time running free
    She loves you....
    eternally
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow! angel dat was beautiful
    i love how u hit it back like a gem
    u give ya self to a confessed love
    u pose da warmth come above
    take flyte to my delight as i kiss
    ya heart into da morning bliss
    tracing da track of my love tears
    thankz for this flow back ...........
     
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    nabraska Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ya'll are some amazing poets
    one day we'll create a word that really shows it
    confessions and submissions,
    moon and stars
    all of you by far are
    amazing and beautiful.....

    thank you!! :spin:
     
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    Thankz watz for the flow back
    to kind whewwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    make a brutha feel special up in here .
     
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    your welcome i really enjoyed the flow....

    and also...
    thank you Richie Rich
    b/c it was you who sparked it
    and made it flow...freely
    within this confession
    so thank you.. :wink:

    and ummm on my way above.... :love:

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Nabraska.....yes indeed one day we will
    thank u so much from my heart ya words
    means a lot to me most humble u too are amazing
     
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    an honor sistah angel happy u enjoy my thoughts as i pen
    it all down to canvas it was one that hit me as well as i
    was thinking so this what came out from the thoughts
    wit emotions & feelings flowing freely to da pad thank u
     
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    Difficult not to flow back on this, freely given and freely accepted heartfelt flow. You're quite welcome.
     
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