Black Poetry : Tracing yo face!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In the warm glow of the candle light, and just
    before we say good night .
    I trace your face, not to erase but to embrace
    every nuance, curve, scar and mole.
    Only to spend the next night doing it all over
    again.
    You see I love you like a worn out melody so
    endearing and precious to me.
    I don't want to miss one second of you and one
    minute of you and me.
    I trace your silhouette so I don't forget.
    I trace your brow for in between are the signs
    of lifes heavy plow.
    I trace you lips and fight the urge to kiss, the
    up turn of your upper lip and the curl of your
    moustache.
    I trace your ears and embed unspoken words
    of passion.
    I fashion a love halo all around your head and
    invoke the spirits to give you sweet dreams.
    Of all the many things........I trace your face
    so that time, death or distance cannot erase,
    that face which my heart does embrace!
    BJS(C)2001
     
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    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms b...

    Very nice poem.......

    Epiphany..:heart:
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Real

    Sweet ms. b! Very Sweet!

    Reas
     
  4. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU!

    I do so appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
    MS. LUCIOUSB
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MsB...

    This is lovely!



    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How lovely! Romance ribbons lace this tender flow so effortlessly! I was caught up in the gentle whisper of your fingers and the symphony of your words.

    Nice to meet you!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was very beautiful ...i enjoyed this to the fullest
     
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