Quiet Poetry Lounge : Traces and Spaces

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, May 1, 2005.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Traces and spaces
    wrapped around such
    secretive intimate places
    Spaces between us that are
    longing to be filled by embraces
    of reality that words earnestly try to capture
    as poetry paints portraits of that rapture...
    That rapture of the mind, when questions
    are answered, revealing the mystery,
    unearthing the precious gems that fill in
    the blanks of what we've become, our history
    The rapture of the heart, learning that
    the love is real, not just a dream state
    that empty space in love's chamber now brimming
    with the realization that you're each other's soul mate
    The rapture of the body, as committed souls
    trace each crevice, every inch of skin
    filling those spaces that long to be filled
    voices screaming out from passion held within.
    Traces and spaces
    formerly empty places
    now filled with love
     
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    Traces and spaces
    the look on our faces
    as we embrace with the sun set in the backdrop
    nothing but sand under our feet and a little rock
    sista watz this piece is so so hot

    Thanx for allowing us to be sensually grabbed.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad to know you could appreciate the spaces in these places my words conveyed Godssoulja. Thank you so much for your response in flow brotha.
     
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    Out of sight!

    I fully embrace this awe inspiring flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    warming my soul this was outstanding
    as i trace the spaces forward into the
    depth of this .......love it !
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you 1poet for embracing this flow. Much appreciated brotha poet.
    Glad to know you're loving the depths of the vibe brotha Rich, thank you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    truely welcome on this outstanding piece .........
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks again Rich, your support is much appreciated.
     
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    I can appreciate the truth that you're putting
    out here continue on with the feeling and the truth.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I try, soulful2006, I try. Thank you poet, hope you are enjoying yourself here.
     
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