Black Poetry : Touching

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TOUCHING
    Touching my hand
    Touching my heart
    Touching my soul
    Touching each part
    Touching my pain
    Touching my brain
    Touching my tears
    Touching my arms that fold
    Uncrossing them so that you can hold
    Touching the closed off places
    Bad memories your love erases
    Giving me new one's to hold on to
    Touching you
    Touching me
    Touching all that encompasses us
    Touching our dreams and fears
    Touching me there and here
    Touchging me far and near
    Just touching me when I sleep
    Til I can't tell where I begin and you end.
    Touching me like a lover , touching me like
    a friend.
    So touching, hope it never ends!:heart:
    BJS (C) 2001
     
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    HERE & THERE
    TOUCHING
    EVERYWHERE
    CARESSING TEARS
    CRASHING FEARS
    GIVEN NEW LOVE
    MEMORIES
    DIE
    WHY LIE !!
    TOUCHING CAN BE FUN
    TOUCHING CAN MAKE U RUN
    TOUCHING CAN GET CLOSE
    TOUCHING CAN MAKE U...??????
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummmm

    I liked the way you touched this peace mslb




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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Touching is a source of healing!

    I wrote this piece for several reasons!
    But like any good buffet take what you will!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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    Ms B,

    Touching flow....enjoyed the read. thanks:)

    Madd Sistahly Love :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    mmmmmmm...

    I am touched by this piece...your PEACE!!

    Respect!!

    Afri
     
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    Oh I hasd to pull this out of the crates, this was so touching and sweet. great write poet
     
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