Black Poetry : Touching my soul!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Touching my soul , like butterfly wings grazing flowers.
    Touching my soul, you mentally make love to me for hours.
    Touching my soul, you find a we-ness in being and that everything is ours.

    Touching my soul , you fed thirsty knowledge to my weather beaten soul.
    Touching my soul, you finished my sentences yes even my thoughts , with me having
    no fear of a loss of control.

    Touching my soul, you left your name written on my heart.
    Touching my soul, you listened to me as my life story I did impart.
    Touching my soul, you released the boy in you to be the man that I needed you
    to be, never once hesitating to give you my heart.

    Touching my soul, I sighed as our chakra's cried in sweet release.
    Touching my soul, you brought order to my chaos and the prescence of peace.
    Touching my soul, you showered cool droplets of love on this whithered flower
    and brought me back to life...and I sighed as our chakra's cried in sweet release.

    BJS(c)2003
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i so likes this feeling the vibe
    and understanding the touching of the soul
    and bringin back to life..wooo..ya reading my mind..big sis
     
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    this was displayed very nicely sistah lovin da flow
     
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    Oh my...

    This gripped everything within me...
    I can't explain it but I love this piece...

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    Re: TO msluciousb

    Touched my soul with your poem
    I just loved the rhythm
    Great job and poetic work
    Where's my woman call the stork!
     
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    sister this is beautifull.. :heart:













    Love l
     
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    This was wonderful, very expressive and true.
     
  8. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Fellow scribes!!!!!!!!

    It is good to be appreciated, it is great to be understood!

    Blessings on Your House!
    :wave:
     
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    Back in time to one of my Favs...

    Still feeling this flow and its 2005 wow

    now where ya at to bring your light back on up in this forum...QQn

    Peace my sister
    Angel
     
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