Black Poetry : Touching God

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  1. Onichika

    Onichika Active Member MEMBER

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    touching God


    capture the moment and hold
    through discipline and control
    change your minds role
    mould mindfulness to your will
    turn turbulent waters to still
    illusion reigns but reality is real
    devil eroded but can't steal
    the greatest the jah built
    burn the heaps of filth
    fears unfounded
    the system is surrounded
    really it's astounding
    We the people all bound in
    key to freedom god handed
    yet we all dumb founded
    as to how to flee
    our own trechery
    moral murdering spree
    many plea for a little clarity
    no freebies life itself is charity
    hold each moment in time
    thoughs of past and future blind
    what binds us to the stars
    wars waged near and far
    causing our own nature to fray
    phazing each point in the day
    may the gift of morality
    not be rivaled
    with thoughts the lessen reality
    clear your mind state
    focus on five senses
    with a clean slate
    kick back relax
    let the beauty of life gravitate
     
  2. tashatoya

    tashatoya Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well..

    Welcome Poet! This piece is beautiful. I love your style, it speaks the truth so beautifully and clearly... Keep em' Comin!
     
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    re: touching

    Excellent Write.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully done poet !
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of peace and harmony
    welcome from above as i bless this some love
    happy u join in ........
     
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    Let the beauty of life reign over the chaos. Liked the rhyme and appreciated the message. Welcome to Destee, hope to hear more from you.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Here's a warm welcome to you, from the house of love...
    welcome aboard poet, this piece was wonderful and fullfilling to the soul, thanks.
     
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    This piece is well laid out and it has excellent flow.
    Thanx for sharing.
     
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    Beautiful concept and message, great flow.
     
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    I like that!

    Great job, poet. :darts:
     
  10. Onichika

    Onichika Active Member MEMBER

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    thanx for the feed back everyone.
     
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