Black Poetry : touched....

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have visioned us walking ....


    me holding his hand ...
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    and you on his other hand....


    we walked in a Field...

    I smiled at him ..
    you smiled at him..




    and than he let go..


    there was this space between eachother....

    we looked and we smiled at eachother...


    and He said....


    ""Youre On youre own now....""






    we took echother hands....





    and we were...






    touched...




     
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    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a sweet drop, hard as hell to read, but sweet indeed. i had to highlight it. peace

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    touched by an angel very lovely piece sista
     
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    Like the hands of God telling you that everything will be okay. This was very peaceful.
     
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