Black Poetry : Touched You....( In The Evening )

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  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let me touch you with words as I lay you in a poetic interlude
    Lyrics bond as I devour you as my poetic food
    Lips linger off every vowel of this poetic smile
    IM the python of the Nile
    Whispering woodwind like sounds from a quartet of stylize

    Touch you poet? This I can and will do with the essence of kyrie
    Touch you poet? That will be done until your poetic taste is fiery

    pulsate these rymthic renditions into climatic sensations
    Taste the paraphrase of the afternoon's poetic licentious accommodations
    Pharased beyond paranormal limitations
    This will be this evenings touched declaration

    000000000000000000000hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

    I am this poeticPython coiled into my raw flamboyant momorandum
    As I touch you poet within this tethered pen stroking at random
    caressing every curve of your words as your breath rushes over like a phantom
    "I touch you poet"
    These words I chant them!

    I touched you poet
    ..........................I touched you poet
    ...................................................I touched you poet
    ................................................................................I touched you!

    In the evenings stanza!
     
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    Touch me as you do with the words you lace
    Lyrical bliss for I shall be you poetic soul
    Releasing every vowels with verbs and nouns
    Inhale my essence..as you play my harp
    Im the ANGEL of the NILE
    Whispering soft melodies from a stream of falls

    Touch me
    Touch me

    Embrace the firery taste of me
    Inhale my rhythm as the bliss of a new love
    Takes place
    Declare for I am the POETIC ANGEL
    ..........................................You seek

    Touch me within this evenings stanza!
    As i chant ya name

    Upon grace I sit
    Flow with ease
    As I exhale
    And release in the
    PYTHON‚ÄĚS POETIC flow
    touch me
    ...............touch me
    ............................touch me
    within this flow i shall surrender
    .........................................touch
    ....................................................
    ........................................................me
     
  3. queentswana

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    lawdy, lawdy, lawdy...*smh* in shame. yall are just a bit to grown and fresh hope I don't have to bring yall back down to the stomping ground.
    but I understand...I was young and in love once :sand:
    On the real, it was so beautiful and it said quite a bit...I like the way the two of you flowed with this piece...like it was meant to be. I'm so glad to read the love that just pour out of you two "SNAKES" ... :kiss: :kiss:
     
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    :flamet: :flamet: :flamet:

    Hot like fire, the two of you never disappoint. Python, glad to see you picked up your pen again, brother!! :grouphug:
     
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    :jawdrop: wow python,....shoot can you touch me too?:blush::hot:
     
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    *smh* in shame again...This young man is taking...
    now you take this :court:
    oh my, did that hurt?? :laugh:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 off da hook touching
    the inner souls flow on bruh
     
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    Seems like someone's words have caught fire, liked your phrasing in this steamy flow.
     
  9. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thanks: I just try to keep it alive up in here at times I do thank MBA foe her added flow..... I don't think the flow in this one is done just yet! :grin:
     
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    I Sho Hope It Ain't Dun...Pick Dem Pens Back Up Cuz This Is Hot Diggity Tyte.

    Bring It On...I'ms Awaitin' :jumping:


    ~j
     
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