Black Poetry : TOUCHED MY MIND

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  1. Securenote

    Securenote Member MEMBER

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    My brother tell me do you have a minute?
    See I know that you are quite busy.
    But could you slow your roll and
    listen to me for a moment.

    I want to thank you in advance for the time you allow me.
    You see, I am a sister that you knew from way back.
    The same sista who has been breaking
    her back to give you time, make time,
    find time, even create time for you!

    My brother! I know your job is important.
    I know, I know, but let me put you on!
    Building a friendship and a relationship
    is just as important.

    Look at me my brother; I am a sistah
    Who desires to help you build your dreams.
    I am not here to destroy dreams.
    I am the sistah who wants to speak and give
    life into your vision.

    I am the sistah who desires to share
    her vision and dreams with you.
    There are power in numbers,
    and strength in unity.

    My brother, my brother let my
    words fall on your heart
    and soothe your soul.
    Like honey soothes your throat.
    My love for you makes it necessary to open up
    to you, and make you believe,
    and feel the urge for us

    I know, I know you don't have time.
    I just had to let you know
    That you have touched my mind!

    by Securenote :heart:
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Securenote...
    this was a wonderful mix...
    of love, passion and inquisition
    of a heart...that needs its
    attention lured into the direction
    of its destiny...

    that destiny being the love
    of a woman...that pales
    the very light of day...

    flow on girl...
    make that man...make time

    digging this...
    Sage
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!
    dis was sweet and compassionate
    as the mind touched the mental
    warmth of friendship as a moment
    taken in truely one see u and listening
    very nice flow ...............................
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tight and sweet..flow head on
    Peace
    Angel
     
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