Black Poetry : Touched Morning

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  1. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dawn cracks opening eyes whence they lay shut from evening shades
    Female figurine turns back towards man each night she laid.

    Thought he no day could top the one before, till this fine morn
    Torrential wind against torso, He wakes to a blown horn.

    He no longer Little BoyBlueballs, the horn has been blown.
    With man at top of deep voice tones screaming in tongues never known.

    Appreciativley watching as he tiptoes through her tulips with two lips
    His Mass Erectile poses, her swelled hip lips, they fall and slip

    She leads man to heavens gates to see Elysian fields in full bloom.
    Macrocosmic questions answered, universe now the size of his room.

    Shredded burnish bedcoverings stealing touches are no crime
    When touch is stolen from him, he forgets year, month, day and time.

    Uncontrolled actions when four hands clinch together to form two fists
    They fight cumpulsory inevitablities as bodies shake, twitch and twist

    Nahshon-Rae
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    Nice

    Let me be the first to say
    welcome :wave:
     
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    what a climactic way for the day to begin...

    this peace was nice and it's nice 2 "see" a new face.
    :toast:

    nfinitely,
    jh.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WHAT A WAY TO BRING IN DA DAY

    AS I WELCOME U IN TO PLAY !!
    NICELY DONE AND WELL WRITTEN !!
    WELCOME WELCOME WELCOME !!!
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    Welcome from the Bishop:wave:

    This was truly tight!!! Looking for more.
     
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    Loved it!

    Liked the flow--especially a case of Blue Balls being out to rest--that is classic--Amun-Ra

    :confused: Is Religion to blame for the WTC tradgedy? Stop past and read a different view of the World Trade Center Crisis--http://www.destee.com/forums/showthread.php?threadid=4105
     
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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    another great poet has graced us with their presence
    Nahshon thank you for joining us
    please make yourself at home
    for as it should be, you'll find nothing but love here

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    this, touching

    brings.....beauty unspeakable....to be savored....all the day through...to be anticipated....longed for....this, touching....to be repeated....at a time....that will never be....too soon....


    scribe, poet!

    thank you

    a
     
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    thanks for the comments....
     
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    I am back....
     
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