Black Poetry : Touched Morning

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  1. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Touched Morning

    Dawn cracks opening eyes whence they lay shut from evening shade
    Female figurine turns back towards, the man each night she laid.

    Thought he no day could top the one before, till this fine morn
    Torrential wind against his torso, He wakes to a blown horn.

    He’s no longer Little-Boy-Blue-balls, the horn has been blown.
    With man at top of deep voice tones screaming in tongues never known.

    Appreciativley watching as he tiptoes through her tulips with two lips
    His Mass Erectile poses, while her swelled hip lips, fall and slip

    She leads man to heavens gates to see Elysian fields in full bloom.
    Macrocosmic questions answered, universe now the size of his room.

    Shredded burnish bedcoverings stealing touches are no crime
    When touch is stolen from him, he forgets year, month, day and time.

    Uncontrolled actions when four hands clinch together to form two fists
    They fight cumpulsory inevitablities as bodies shake, twitch and twist

    Nahshon-Rae
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ah yes...
    This really touched my senses....
    Keep flowin.

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully laid out ...this woke me up !
    sweet scribe brutha
     
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    I aimed to please with this piece...
     
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    and pleasing u did .....continue
     
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