Black Poetry : Touched by an Angel (as real as it can get)

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  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am a lost soul in need of direction
    You are the arrow pointing me to peace
    Boxed in by my surroundings
    But conversing with you is my release
    My fresh breath of air
    My match in the darkest hour
    At times Im too weak to continue
    But you love has become my power

    Teardrops fall like rain n flow like rivers
    But your laughter could replace rays of sunlight
    My feet could be glued to cement
    But the sound of your voice takes me on flights
    If I didnt know your name
    Id mistake you as queen of Egypt
    Because "Ebony" represents the strength of a black woman
    when her equal needs it

    If I had to picture heaven
    Id take a picture of you
    If I had to create a potion for beautiful
    Id throw in mixtures of you
    Im afraid of fire
    But if you were a flame, Id let you burn me
    It took 18 years to find myself
    But 10 months for you to learn me

    I look @ you and see my reflection
    The same fight you see in me, I see in you
    Women come a dime a dozen
    But even if you handed them a flashlight, the couldnt hold a light to you
    Wondering if there are more of you
    Because you've hit me @ every angle
    Feeling as pure as holy water in heaven's pond
    Because Ive been touched by an angel.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sounds like a beautiful caring angel to me
    tyte drop here poet !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a carefree easy loving feel to this piece, this was beautiful.
     
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    That was hot

    You are definitely right that is as good as it gets. You should keep on writing. It was so beautiful and you can feel just how strong and real that love is. Keep doing whatcha doing.
     
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    Likes the romance of your peace ~
     
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    Heartfelt Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aawww that poem is so sweet. I'd know I'd be crying right now if it was dedicated to me. Keep it up, Scribe.
     
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