Black Poetry : Touch......Yet Untouched

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    An everlasting touch
    Of being untouched
    Pulling me deep
    …………………Deeper
    We go…..
    Like un-forbidden fruit
    We dance in a sweet hush
    Cries of joy…..unreleased
    In hidden passion
    As the taste invades
    The yearning comes
    Of passionate play

    Deeper still….
    We go…
    ..........Deep

    As we fit like the perfect piece
    Of a lost puzzle found in the dark
    Mending souls to make light
    Is this my love
    Is this true
    Can it be
    My heart aches
    My being trimbles
    Touch....untouched
    As you reach for me
    Deeper……still….we go

    Running thoughts of you and I
    Hand in hand……
    Overwhelming of the love you have
    Craving a passionate desire
    For a release of soft whispers
    You holding me
    I holding you.....Deeper
    The bond
    The foundation
    Deeper……still….we go

    Forces of you come alive
    Like a dream so far
    But near…..
    As my heart opens
    An accepts your love
    Like a soulful garden mix
    You are my soul fix
    A paradise of meaning
    Untouched but engage
    Secret thoughts of
    A melody dance for two
    In a sweet romance
    Becoming one
    Deeper……still...we go

    An everlasting kiss
    An everlasting touch
    Of your touch….
    Untouched…..
    Flows through the wind
    And covers me
    I hear your voice in my sleep
    As the clock strikes and the sun-rise
    Hearts touch in a new phase
    As we dance in this romance
    Deeper….still….we go

    An everlasting touch
    Of being untouched
    Pulling me deep
    …………………deeper

    Deeper.....still.....we go


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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da untouched of essence
    dancing calling as we fancy
    foot work into a bliss of love
    a rapture of foreverness is
    captured on the waves of
    hearts we flip the romantic
    measures to a divine pleasure
    touched
    by the beauty of exsitance
    inside da cuddling arms of
    gentle embrace facing the
    distance of reasons
    untouched
    love behold within the spear
    of playing harp the magical
    strings play night n' gal
    touched
    tonight is my loveth on
    da wingz of tomorrow .........
    Tyte passionate drop !
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    within a touch
    of yet untouched
    essence flows
    as the love grows...
    two becoming one
    loving your flow Rich
    Happy you felt the vibe
    as i feel yours.....
    thank you for the love
    and support you always show
    love you!!!!!

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome
    from da untouched
    heart to the touched
    soul as two mend as
    one on the mound of
    compassionate glist
    inside the vision of eyes
    and played cross da
    hearts for a togetherness
    in da wake of love .......

    LIKEWISE !
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :grouphug: :kiss:
     
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    hisili Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lyk ur flow thys poem is untouchable and deep, im lovin thys site 4 piece lyk this mad luv 2 u.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love and support
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    I absolutely love this piece. I came back and read it a few times then I sent it to my best friend...she loves it too! You are very talented and blessed with the gift of the pen. Everything just seems to flow so effortlessly. Keep doing what you do!
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you Ladysoul...i dont have many favorite pieces i write but this one is one of my specials i like the flow too...lol thanks for the love and reply
    Peace
    Angel
     
  10. MrFolklore

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    What a delightfully enchanting piece

    Reading the words deeper, deeper, deeper brings thoughts of .... dang there goes my mind again. :skillet: On the serious side, great poem. :welldone:
     
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