Black Poetry : Touch Me

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  1. Jelani_Dalmar

    Jelani_Dalmar Active Member MEMBER

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    :new: Touch Me

    Touch me; let me feel your petite hands stroke threw the waves of my hair;
    I don’t care
    If you mess things up,
    The sensations of your touch,
    Is just too much
    To give a dayum.
    Touch me,
    With the sugariness of your lips,
    Let the warm moist embrace of you kiss,
    Carry me into the definitive form of bliss…
    It’s so incredible what you can do to me with just one lil kiss.
    Touch me, let the tip of your tongue massage the sides of my neck
    This is the best kept
    Secret that this is my spot
    You’re doing the things you do boo, that are making a brotha hott.
    Touch me, down the midpoint of my chest
    Caress
    Me as if this will be the last instant will share
    Bare it all for me, holding absolutely nothing back….
    Touch me; let your hands and your lips
    Work magic between my hips
    As they make their way down my chocolate pool,
    You’re making me a fool
    Of Love
    Touch me, climb on top of me, and let me feel me inside of you, and become one, not for fun,
    But so our love can rise and falls like the sun,
    Cause love has its ups and downs,
    Its smiles it’s frowns
    But true love will not be denied.
    Touch me as we lay side by side
    Subsequent to the emotional roller coast ride
    Hide
    Nothing, say what you feel,
    Appeal to my soul,
    And watch as our loves unfolds….
    “I LOVE YOU”….
    Those three words are the ones I wanted to hear,
    Now the fear
    Is gone, and it should be clear for you to see….
    Those three spoken words, truly Touched Me….. :cool:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh i like this...
    i read then i go oh then wow
    then it went wow again
    and went way to a wooooweeeeee
    this was a pretty hot flow....i like
    :angel1:
     
  3. Jelani_Dalmar

    Jelani_Dalmar Active Member MEMBER

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    :huh:
    Thanks for the love boo, I was feeling some kind of way when I wrote it last night...
     
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    ahh yes
    to come together as one
    very nice indeed
    wonderful feeling
    from your flow
    very nice
    Peace
     
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    wow:):blush:
     
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    Very Nice Jelani

    Touch and flow as you go.

    " You’re making me a fool
    Of Love "


    Everybody plays the fool sometimes. I don't mind putting on the hat. Every case and chance I get. Been in love only three times. They last a life time. One standing out from the other. hard to chose which should have remained my lover. Ain't no real fools. Only those who never traveled. Sometimes you lose the one that does that special thing.. another love comes along and makes you sing. Again.

    " True love will not be denied "
     
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    i'm really likin' this... :)
     
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