Black Poetry : Touch Me In The Morning

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **a key style. Contains excerpt from Vivian Green's "Fanatically" a "Love Story"


    Touch me in the morning...
    Touch me like cool, natural silk against my bare thigh;
    like the feel of a deep bass line as it
    pulses through my being.
    Touch me in the morning...
    Touch me like the warm and soothing feel of
    warm April showers against my naked body;
    like vivid colors of paint on the easel; Hmmmmm I love
    every brushstroke.
    Touch me in the morning...
    Touch me like a mother's lips to her
    newborns' cheek;
    like the cooling effect of my body when I submit to a
    sweet sleep.
    Touch me...
    Touch me like the feel of hot, smooth and creamy
    coffee going invading my system;
    like the smooth wisps of 'Tibetan Rain' incense spinning
    around my head.
    Touch me....
    Touch me through and through.
    No hesitation.
    No regret.
    No dissatisfaction.
    No delayed reaction.
    No blindness.
    Only absolute surety that I need you.
    I'm fanatically addicted see,
    the way that you be touching me;
    is like a drug or some bad habit;
    and since your mine, I've got to have it.

    Touch me in the morning...
    Touch me like the feel of your sweet-peppermint drenched
    whisper of something naughty in my ear;
    like the cool-warm effect of Icy/Hot on my
    tensed muscles.
    Touch me...
    I'm fanatically addicted see,
    the way that you be touching me;
    is like some drug........Hmmmm I've got to have it,
    so...

    Touch me in the morning...
    Touch me like only you can.


    ~Copyright
    The year of the Monkey (2004).
    The 93rd year, 4th month, 16th day.
    "Son of the Day Star" Publishing
    ~*PropheticNsyght​
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brother...

    Your poetry is Mesmerizing... :bowdown:

    and Inspiring...be sure to check the board :wink:

    you're gonna have to stop writing like this...

    this is addictive... :grin: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Umph, to be touched in this way, wow, makes your mind want to scream. Keep these flows coming.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome drop sweet and mild
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow!....i mean darn....thats a real :hot: poem you got there!
     
  6. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Angelicsage, My darling you are divine and I love your poem Touch Me In the Morning. Your are inspiration in itself.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Watz, Rich and SwtT I just want to say thank you so so so much. God bless.
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No...you are the inspiration....

    this piece was the catalyst for the unearthing

    of some, somekindawonderful poetry...I'd never seen before... :bowdown:

    Thank you for allowing me to flow with you...so to speak.

    Peace and Much Love!
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :eek:hmy: :teach: :love: I am so loving this piece! More! More!
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is what I call a quality write! :teach: Laid out with a smooth flow! :smokin:
     
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