Quiet Poetry Lounge : "touch me" ( a jh /angelicsage col-loveration)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Nov 13, 2003.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    jh
    l am four winds blowing
    north, south
    east and west of you...
    you have my air in your essence
    mediterranean calm
    my chest yields to your integral palm...
    massaging me..
    mentally
    beyond unreachable skies
    as you lay by me
    you have my mystery in your eyes-
    spiralling my spirit into desire
    we then become
    a stream of fire and endless rain
    as l slowly shift into you so that we are one current
    eternizing climax...
    touch me
    with your consolation
    touch me
    with your pain
    touch me with your heart until control has lost you


    angelicsage
    l am...rich & nourishing soil
    lntermittent/ tenderly surrounding
    The deepest parts of you
    ln me... your roots are secure
    l am engrained in these
    Your valor
    You have my woman in your aura
    Your simultaneous flux... enters
    My earth wantonly quakes in satiation of you
    Dizzy, l find solace & confirmation
    ln the grips of your arms, hands... firmness
    My earth trembles at your exponential emergence
    Lace-leaf branches tower
    The endowment of your seed
    Blooms, returning to me
    Planting
    Touch me
    With your consciousness
    Touch me
    With your spirit
    Touch me
    With your passion until intensity controls you...
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    oh
    my
    God...

    i'm shook...

    what?


    [email protected]..i don't know what to say...


    i've been touched,,,
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was awesomely beautiful
    y'all like hand n' glove
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my goodness :bowdown:

    This is a new style, and an amazing one: spiritual erotica. How elegant and lovely. You two are the truth.
     
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    oh my no words...
    this is just oh my...
    work it yall din done it..
     
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    mercy...
    what can I say...[email protected]..
    ummmmmmm....errrrrrrrr....uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
    oh wait...ok
    no thas not it
    oh I got it...

    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
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    Whoa!!! I am feeling
    your style... :toast:
    More love to you for
    this one!
     
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    im in awe:eeek:
     
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    possibly in tears cuz this was breathtaking
     
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    First & Foremost

    To J’hiah
    My poetic reflection
    A fusion of flawlessness
    In limitless waters…
    …………….the Echo
    that returns to me
    when I cry out…
    purity… rhythm/
    an exemplary flow
    come to me…
    touch me
    with burning vowels
    touch me
    metaphysically
    touch me
    with your Quill
    touch me and inscribe your
    Signature…
    Into the realms of my
    Verbiaaaaaaage…shhhh

    Thank you once again for
    An awesome performance!
    King…Jh, infinite as only he can be!
    :toast:
     
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