Black Poetry : touch it

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  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is what i call the "the spoke"

    reason 4 rhyme

    Touch It

    Touch souls, worlds sputter in flurry
    Hold out my hand… thoughts become blurry
    Touch a track, never touching the rocks
    Index in my play, walking the blocks

    Touch the world, words are precious like a virgin’s heart
    Thoughts in cerebrums become physical in the dark
    When given away, it’s truly a gift in serene
    Many panarmamics and portals develop through split-screen

    Touch a heart, arrogance washed in it’s cloth
    Brewed to a stomach, as it broths
    The smell simmers, good times
    Welcome anticipation of it when it chimes

    Touch the corner, sometimes employ a coroner
    Often misunderstood like a aged foreigner
    Hurry up and buy, slow the role
    What was once weak in spirit is now swole

    Touch it, caress the curves, organic nature
    Words vibrate, reverberations create ya
    Shear layers black, silver, network is wireless
    Thru f and em, many adimire this

    Touch the exterior, the interior carries channels
    Different ways to hold it, many handles
    Love handles like holding boo
    Circles gather in streets, spit for the crew

    Touch it, feel the magnet, attract to it
    It speaks amplified, how to react to it
    Grace it, embrace it, a joy to taste it
    Fear when facelift, just to face it

    Touch it, flickers like a glimpse of light
    In the hour midnight, pass the mic
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow! dis was tyteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
    can't wait til dat book hit , let me know !
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mhhmmmmmmmmmmm...let me touch it for real! lol :)
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this one, so deep and sweet.
     
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    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pass the mic bruh.....but you definately need it back......nice one
     
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    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Touch it, feel the magnet, attract to it
    It speaks amplified, how to react to it
    Grace it, embrace it, a joy to taste it
    Fear when facelift, just to face it

    Touch it, flickers like a glimpse of light
    In the hour midnight, pass the mic"

    I LOVE this part.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Day-yum. This poem is like a rich meal, which you must eat and digest slowly in order to properly enjoy it. Or in this case, understand every inch of its true meaning. This is beautiful, brah.
     
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