Black Poetry : Totally Selfless Interlude

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was laying on the bed, just chillin
    enjoying with relaxing ease
    the gentle sensation
    of the cool spring breeze
    whisking across my body
    I was almost asleep
    when I felt the smooth,
    silky liquid slowly seep,
    oozing over my lower back.
    So discreet, I could barely feel
    him unbuttoning my shirt.
    So gently, he continued to peel
    off clothing, til just a hint remained.
    The oil began to trickle everywhere
    until my skin was completely saturated.
    Now the massaging begins, oil all in my hair
    fingertips tracing
    my heart is racing
    strategically placing
    hands, embracing
    my mind, encasing
    my aura, lacing
    us even closer together
    in this serene interlude.
    Just an example of
    what Black love can exude.
    And he says that I can just
    go to sleep now,
    his satisfaction came from mine...
    wow....
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa, sister....ssssssssexayyyyy :shades:

    You know, I love erotica. It's sexier than sex, and you sure know how to do it right. Very very nice.
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the thumbs up sis. I agree, sometimes it's not what you say, it's what you allude to. Much appreciated gempis.
     
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    Ahhhhh man!
    Watz that was
    beautiful!
    sometimes
    these moments are one
    of the things
    that are taken
    for granted.
    The impact it
    has is remarkable
    if only we slow
    done to catch
    it's essence unfolding.
    Beautiful read Sister!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    bedroom fun ya opening up
    dis here makes me wanna
    take flyte to ya house
    look out now !!!
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PurpleMoons thank you much for your kind words. Yes, moments like these should be cherished.
    Gotta have a little bit of fun sometimes Rich, lol @ you. I'll look up toward the north star tonite.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well you know you took me there... :love: just floting all over the room, gliiding and sliding off the oil...wow was I there...
    beautiful poem...keep that bliss.
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just my imagination dreaming up a blissful moment, thank you for letting me know the words took you there queentswana.
     
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    now this is so nice
    and i feel the relaxation beaming from this script
    gosh i am liking this ..wonderful flow indeed:)
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you caught that relaxing vibe Bluewater, thanks for responding so.
     
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