Black Poetry : Totally Agreeing

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  1. 7thPoet

    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    “Totally Agreeing”

    The grapes of summer’s vines
    entwine
    When pressed become sweet juice
    Our loins, when joined
    become sweet wine
    Impressed
    our nectars fuse

    Fused, our nectars flow
    so slow
    We taste each other’s passion
    Sweet savored flavor
    induced by labor
    I rise to your compassion

    The pulsing desire beneath your veins
    drives my throbbing thoughts insane

    My finger tips and
    warm thick lips
    Probe every inch of your being
    You rise to the occasion
    of my stiff persuasion

    Totally Agreeing
    Totally Agreeing...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee, this was simply luscious. That's all I can say....whew.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep summer juices hot flava drop..
    flow on now
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight drop
    flowhead on....
    i enjoyed this read alot!!!!
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Mmmm why Brotha 7th poet this was simply deluctibly delicious :)
    Ahhh the Love of a blak man is that and more...its SWEETer than the finest wine...
    I relish in the thought my brotha :)
    Thank you for the sense igniting flow :look:
     
  6. 7thPoet

    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love

    Watz
    Rich
    Angel
    Triniti

    this is really not my genre'
    just thought i'd try it...

    think i'll stick to the cultural :hammer:
     
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    I can't tell its not your genre. Beautifully done, 7th! Sweet and perfect verses.
     
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    mmmm...smelling the cork...whirling it around and then I take a sip rolling this wine throughout my mind - so that all the flavors are captured by the tongue and roof of the mouth.

    Just call me a " 7th Wine Enthusiast"...

    this may not be your genre but when the soul speaks...

    it reflects a beauty that many don't always see...

    Can you tell...that I am in "Agreement"...

    This was absolutely..."Fabulous"....

    and although I'm responding...

    I'm actually speechless...
     
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    all in agreement...say aye....

    aye...this was a tight piece my man
    one love
    khasm
     
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    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you sincerely Jazzy, coming from you I must re-evaluate... :wink:
     
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