Black Poetry : Torn

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by honeebrownsuga, Oct 10, 2001.

  1. honeebrownsuga

    honeebrownsuga Active Member MEMBER

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    How do u
    make yourself readily accessible
    4 what your body tells u
    is totally unbearable?
    Torn between 2
    A triangle of love, lust & u
    I reminisce of once telling u
    a man likes his cake & 2 eat it too
    Shamefully
    self-observation proves them not to be
    the only guilty
    Can you really ponder
    the thought of
    everlasting love
    w/your significant other
    as you
    look 4ward 2
    quality time w/your lover?
    Does this make sense?
    Or is the pretense
    the love u have 4 your significant other
    because the gift would B replacing him w/another?
    Your lover fulfills the need
    where your mate cannot succeed
    Is it really a need
    or R U just marinating in greed?
    Nearly diminishing you
    As u continue
    To be split in 2
    Or 3
    I love u
    I want u
    Or I love u too
    maybe?
    Because the lover u caught
    has now given u more than u sought
    Aside from his masterful intimate gratification
    his conversation
    has resulted in the same rewarding sensation
    His company
    leaves u nothing less than happy
    as his enlightening words of advice
    have now got u thinkin’ twice
    about who will be your mate 4 life

    © 2001 honeebrownsuga-ljf
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    honeebrownsuga....

    Point taken ... well scribed thoughts... Pro - voking further cerebration.

    Thanks for sharing!

    N2
     
  3. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****

    I like your style! Brill baby!

    Respect
    Reas
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    HoneeBrownSuga !!!! Well Well Well !!!
    I'm certainly torn ...
    between reading this one moe again
    or going on to one of the other peace's
    you've shared! :)
    Please make yourself at home!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  5. honeebrownsuga

    honeebrownsuga Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank u!

    Much thanks everyone for your comments and positive reinforcement!

    Destee, thank you for your welcome.
    With all the positive energy going on
    around here, I've had no choice but to
    feel at home.

    honee :heart:
     
  6. sexe1

    sexe1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Honee...

    This was nice....I liked this
    Keep it coming
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YA MADD SKILLZ

    OF POETIC JUSTICE BRINGS UP WISDOM
    GURL U WRITE DEM WORDS ....I FEEL YA
    INNER THOUGHTS:heart: :kiss:
     
  8. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    definatley vibing

    to this poetic flow !
    very nice well done sistah girl

    ~Natasha~:x:
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Honee,

    You laid this down thick! Very good work.

    Madd Sistahly Love:heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
  10. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Honee....


    ...speak on it sistah-friend!! :)

    now!... this ryght here brings to mind a line
    from an Erykah Badu song... "i know i'm a lot
    of woman... but not enough to divide the pie!"


    this was tyght to death!! i'm lovin' your style!

    OneLuv.
    SunShyne~
     
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