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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    It's tortuous to torment me
    I couldn't suffer any more
    then what my heart has endure

    I'm nothing more to you then
    what you identified me as
    like a scrapy dictionary

    Sweet & sour notes of false love
    I am like da MaN of some historic
    moment or event played with

    My heart is eaten in this long
    solitary unbearable showcase
    behind my back the other letter

    Written on miserable paper
    filled with complaints
    is poisonous to my soul

    De grace of my love been
    overcast and tormented
    it's been Redrum

    Inside this horror lay
    my love upon this squeal
    of pain, I could just die.

    Broken&lonely
     
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    touching
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    we all good this just another side of me exploring
     
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    Gotta Balance everthing to beome whole!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O'yeah we all do that's the beauty in it when you can switch sides and use the whole box
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    Ahh....nice flows
    some one light some incense n candles

    Real soul-searching write, Rich.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    just drifting along da poetic shores........thankz
     
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    Why has thee forsaken me
    couldn't see the real me
    tormented from the too much
    complaining and defry of my
    heart i weep in da blood
    she could have just left
    or killed me with the arrow
    maybe even just stayed hushed
    as i erase all memories,database
    and script the end
     
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