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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Somehow my love was only an image
    i could not suffer more beyond living
    for your shaded lips lingers upon me
    as my heart now eaten by love
    u became my solitary moments in time
    captured by your eyez in glare
    instill beauty my heart race yet beaten

    Tormented insoul cascading rapidly
    i was nothing more to u except that
    i was identified with some sweet n' sour
    moments at da heels of your life
    i was like da man whom held da carriage
    in some great historic event u pose'd
    and yet u looked pass me

    Searching my beginnings again
    forth i'm tired my beloveth
    thy passion lay on miserable paper
    stain by tears of yesteryears morrow
    tuggin at my heart and soul
    forth i may kiss u tis one time , shared
    that's when i hate u, forth it's when i loved u

    Tormented shadow box
    inside my chambers of walls
    i only can envision by reasons
    da pain cuts deep
    we now can't embrace arms
    only complaints, tis unbearable
    i am not poisonous as i bid u farewell .:em4600: :bye:
     
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    No one is poisonous
    but they can hurt by deed
    Letting fear get in the way
    causing their love's heart to bleed

    Pages have been written
    Books have been penned in fact
    Describing the depths of my heart
    Must of been something the words lacked

    Because all that lay behind those words...
    was truly there
    I looked straight at you with warmth and care
    But look directly upon me? You wouldn't dare.

    I suppose I should be used to feelings swallowed,
    cause I've been expected to swallow mine
    Always being expected to understand the aloofness
    never being expected to draw the line

    Wanting to say goodbye is never easy
    Actually saying it, harder still
    Letting fear rule your heart, or knowing someone let fear
    rule them, what's worse? Don't know, guess I never will.

    But I do know pain
    of heartbreak very well
    Gee, what could've and should've been
    It aches, can't you tell?
     
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    yeah !
    so often emotions get caught up in da mist of envisioning and feelings
    dat leaves da heart strip and in pain for another day , guess u know how
    it get twisted ....................................................................................
     
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    still tormented ..........
     
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    this was nice it didn't rhyme but you got your point across very well liked it rick and thanks for responding to mine
     
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    Thankz another twisted flava and different maze
     
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    torn apart /tormented by love that has saken me
    and left this painful dry ink upon my loom !
     
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    can't shake the torture
     
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    Deep and definiitly felt!
     
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    Thankz sister for feeling me here.......
     
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