Quiet Poetry Lounge : TORMENTED II Another Chapter

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Like an old testement
    in a new stage on broadway
    my love left hanging in da billows
    and then suddenly da remembrance
    of your face came upon me
    eyez bare down on me wit an influence
    one i cannot express three to five
    twenty years vanished like an ole dream

    I open da book wit my mental mind
    searching time again and again rearranging
    my heart & soul dealing wit da changes of
    u and me at the peak of morrow as da stories
    build my love is tormented , so tis how it feel
    to sit alone barefooted and cold
    dim by the factor of salted memories
    mis-ova-stood trap between da
    emotions and feelings of your beings

    I've been tormented by the thoughts
    as we share space and age time til
    my eyez open to see emptyness
    u washed my spirit in mud and step on my love
    stole my dreams wit dismay and anger
    i've kissed death at da side of hate
    tormented, sadly tales continue u should have
    seen me to know me that i lived and loved
    may each day past us we fine happiness
    departed and be released from hell's bondage.
    :SuN026:
     
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    I know how it feels
    to be misunderstood
    You're not really felt or seen
    in the manner that you should

    Hate...such a strong word
    But it's sometimes used aptly
    You hate the potential beauty of the union
    You hate that your love wasn't taken seriously
    You hate the confusion and the tears
    You hate what you should've done, differently

    We may never know all the ins and outs
    about it, all the wonder whys...
    Why there are heavenly hellos
    and gut wrenching goodbyes...
     
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    sometime when we hate we love
    often we get misunderstood
    then da play and lies mound
    to a sound ears can't bare
    but dat pain comes wit a flair
    tormented !
     
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    I can't help but feel this hold
    a love that's deep and bold
    has me so tormented down to my soul
    my body is now numb and cold !

    somebody save meeeeee !!!!!
     
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    The only way
    to truly be saved
    is to give in to that love
    that you've so often craved
    Continue as you have, and that
    torment will be too awful to mention
    Take an actual step into reality
    Step right into her love's direction
    And your efforts will be met
    with the utmost affection
     
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    steppin close , i so giveth me unto the glist of love
    may it bring me one step to understanding the way.
     
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