Black Poetry : TOP OF DA CHART

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Top of da chart more then u know
    seen by da luminous soft glow
    taken in depth of thou greatest shine
    number one on my heart, soul & mind

    In a morning glow as u spread ova da land
    nature awaken from it's sleep on a new day's hand
    no longer at bay of an open sea
    place'd in my pond yet in da cares of me

    Pain hit from inside out
    enough to make me scream, holla & shout
    as i enguff all of you deep in my mind
    knowing you sololy makes my day shine

    I stumble at the coast of another
    twisted and lost well uncovered
    for now my flower been taken or stolen
    dat has my all leaking and flowin

    I will not give up nor give in
    for the rare jewel is my greatest friend
    unbound hear my ancient drum calling
    as i sound off deep securities of paradise

    Holding dear to all i have in me still
    but happiness and freely is at your will
    eruptiveness of beauty our mysteries reveal
    our fate was Godly molded and now it's seal

    For my flower is in my spirit and my story
    your indeed my truth and my souls glory
    more then a diamond / silver & gold
    one of the single rare gem ever mold

    come on back home to my heart !
    :flowers::blowkiss::heart::hearts2::flowers:


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  2. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when I say that this was a truly special collection of words....

    I really mean it.

    very romantically posed.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank you sweet apple*pie .....I am humble by your words and i treasure them .
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    what did you do

    chi-playa?

    :SuN018:
     
  5. lovealexandria

    lovealexandria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A beutiful piece. I enjoyed the flow. thanks for sharing!
     
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    just move through da maze so'ja , it's all i can do.

    Thank u lovealexandria for the warm visit within my Chart
     
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