Black Poetry : took my breath away

mochablaze

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YOU TOOK MY BREATH AWAY


You took my breath away baby
and nah I don't mean that in a romantic way.
You sucked the life out of me
to the point where I don't want to live another day.
nothing is the same.
I find my self unable to breath.
heart racing uncontrollably.
messed up mentally.
Oh man how you hurt me
to the point I can't believe
or concieve
how you could do this willingly.
Never in my life have I ever felt so sickly.
so shocked there is nothing that can be said
not understanding where I went wrong
going crazy replaying every moment in my head
my only place of comfort is my bed
as I lay in a fetal position
going through my stages of different dispositions
anger, hurt, frustration
shock, denial, humiliation
there is nothing left to hold on to.
truth is I got played for a fool.
just laying here
I guess trying to survive,
but in reality praying and wishing to God
that tomorrow I won't be alive.
at least not to feel this way another day.
baby you got me lookin' crazy right now and I ain't Beyonce,
but on the real it's my fault
for believing that a thing called love exisisted today.
 
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