Black Haiku : Too Simple...

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  1. strmgam

    strmgam Member MEMBER

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    Love know no borders.
    Hatred knows no boundaries.
    Beware of fine lines.
     
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    elements, they form
    a limitless existence
    thin lines, that is life
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    knocking hard yet soft
    the falsehood maybe standing
    but know who is true
     
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    How can we really deternmine
    our faith, when there's
    such a thin line
    between love
    and hate
     
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    Your third eye sees love
    and hate holding hands, but you
    reject that image
     
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    between thin lines is
    a choice that u make in life
    good or bad God knows
     
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    Simply choose the best
    route, taking love's path is by
    far the happiest
     
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    I haven't had the pleasure of reading you before but as sure I am here in this forum, this has got to be one of the most profound haikus I have ever read and believe me when I say I have read many many haikus.


    :terrific:...joyce applauding your divine haiku wisdom here.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    like joyce said strmgam
    tis a beautiful haiku
    wise simplicity

    the tree bends over
    leaning closer to its root'
    finding it's circle
     
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    Wouldn't it be nice
    love and hatred can't exist
    both in the same place
     
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