Black Poetry : too much

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by babydoll517, Jul 28, 2002.

  1. babydoll517

    babydoll517 Member MEMBER

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    Slow Down

    Money ain't a thing
    but the grease that makes the machine
    crush the poor and make the decent into a whore.

    If you sell your ***
    you can get cash grass.
    Maybe AIDS will kill your ***.

    How can we last in a race they don't even have to run.
    Hanging out, looking dumb
    busting gats for fun.

    Downing rum, don't worry it will go down quicker
    If you don't od from the needle then serosis of the liver.
    And downing 40's was so cool when you were 15.
    Now you're stomach's distended
    Not even 50 your life you want to end it.

    50/50 so f___king young
    but your time on this earth is almost done.
    So try to maintain
    And sip instead of swallow.
    You're 30 now but you'll be 50 tomorrow.

    Moonlight
     
  2. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If they make it

    I''m wid ya on this--well said and timely--Amun-Ra ;)
     
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    MrAdams Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RE: to much

    g-evening babydoll517,

    poem ~ feeling it... :)

    do continue to post your poetry...

    have a bless day...
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LIFE is about the choices we make...the second looks we take...the wrong turns that turn us into who we don't want to be and yet WE ARE.

    STILL, life is good.:)

    THANK YOU.
     
  6. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    it's called living life in the fast lane

    thank you sis'

    :)

    one love :heart:

    pd
     
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