Black Poetry : TOO MUCH COFFEE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Oct 19, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whatever tomorrow brings

    I'll be blessed to see it

    My senses in agreement ~

    Trifle ordinary scenes

    The gospel likes to read

    How the Spirit's moving

    Foolishness we're choosing

    These times undoing me

    Being of crystal children

    But radical and free

    Light shining inside me

    Revealing tragedy

    Like birds in the trees

    Working by the hour

    Scent of flower power

    Almost motivating me

    Baby I'm too much coffee

    My sentimental flavor

    Awakening the neighbors

    Tasting daylight savings time


    Darryl Abdu Omari :roll:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re: Coffee

    Very nice.
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Perhaps not too much coffee, perhaps just enough to keep you seeing life alert and refreshed. I like your clever style.
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your sentimental flavor awaken more than my eyes when i read your pieces. once again great flow
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And ginseng too, baby! This piece is just shiny. OOO
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man now u really took it sweet and smooth
    this was awesomely done
     
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    i think you are the right blend
    of what is needed
    to wake up a few
    that slow in understanding

    Blue
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I do slow motion upon request, but I've yet to find a slow poet among us.

    Thanks ya'll.
     
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