Black Poetry : Too many Thoughts

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rapchild, Dec 19, 2012.

  1. rapchild

    rapchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Havent written a poem in a while.Too much goin on with me (struggle) i have too many things i think about n want to write about but not had da energy to.Eventually will.so i will freestyle if you dont mind.I dont really care if u do anyway,lol.

    We hungry and we poor,we need food,we need help
    struggle n pain is what we need to endure first
    says the Lord before the gift is felt
    then we will know how to use it to benefit all not only self
    some want nothing at all because it will demand too much
    too much could mean your life drained to death
    should i mention names? i believe you know who
    Martin,Malcolm,Mohammed Ali just to mention a few
    they had the gift and they used it well
    how about you, do you even know the true meaning of well?
    **Smile**
     
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    I shd put Bob Marley instead of Ali cuz he still lives,Amen to that.That tells u i was freestylin.
     
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    Name of the poem shd be "before the gift" what u think?
     
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