Black Poetry : Too late to feel guilty now

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by kente417mojo, Jan 26, 2004.

  1. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A treasure, sharing each gold piece with me
    that's what you were
    I said I'll treasure you later
    those gold pieces will always be there
    so I went, leaving you for someone else to discover
    while I treasured women of less value
    because I just knew I had you
    you needed love the way I needed
    the reassurance that I was your only
    guilt was not an issue
    until I no longer had a right to you
    now I finally see your smile
    that's something I haven't seen in a while
    but it's because your now share that treasure
    with someone who treats you
    as number one, not number two
     
  2. Khasm13

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    been there holmes...
    a ruff lesson to learn....
    this was a tyte piece...
    one love
    khasm
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deep scribe....
    peace unto you
    Angel
     
  4. Leaky103

    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes it takes a real man to admit his losses! Sorry you had to experience yours so roughly and I hope next time you won't take your lady for granted.
     
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    Compassion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    growing pains- tough but nessary.
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know how that goes, sometimes you don't miss what you have til it's gone...like the way you worded this.
     
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