Black Poetry : TOO HAVE and TOO HOLD

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    To have & hold
    is like rocks of gold
    laced in beauty
    divine we stroll
    sweet & fruity
    to have temptation
    of desires like da
    blaze of fire i carry
    to hold in rapture
    on a blissful journey
    just u and i together
    on the waves of lovin
    to have and hold
    in arms of caresses
    and whispers my heart
    speak as it confesses
    to have my body
    is to hold my soul
    to have my love
    is to know me whole
    ro feel these emotions
    through my devotion
    like a double convotion
    ready wit deep love's
    explossion in a notion
    as i take u higher like
    getting a new promotion
    to have and hold .........
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a pretty, sweet vibe here Rich. Lovely flow.
     
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    To Have and hold
    the gold of your treasure
    knowing only your pleasure
    so true as love floats
    deep in the falls of hearts
    the soul speaks loud
    a thought of a special someone
    that can make you write
    so clear your heart is true to them
    so keep on flowing so
    i can keep on reading yanno
     
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    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RICH THIS IS A BEAAUTIFUL PIECE EVERYONE SHOULD HAVE SOMETHING TO HOLD ON TO
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz watz for the warm visit

    thankz Angel ya on point
    the someone to hold and
    have throughout da nights
    and to treasure with much
    sweet pleasure all day .....

    Thankz Mistaliberator show nuff
    eveyone need someone to have
    and to hold to there hearts ......
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Another beautiful drop by a beautiful friend of mine I like this a lot
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank you very much for the love & visit Alicia
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Most welcome you are. And I need to thank you also for the advice about the poetry. I saved it and it came to about 23 pages or half a book or so. My mother agrees with you And she wants to help me find a publisher here. Hopefully I'm blessed enough to get a book together in my young age. You know it sure would be nice.
     
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    self publishing is the best way to go today .....often publishers want you to
    get an agent and many time your work is rejected .

    most welcome
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Still pouring on the advice and it is still fallin' on open ears. I hear you and I'll take that into consideration when I feel it is completed.
     
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