Black Poetry : Too Close

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Tyrone, Jul 11, 2001.

  1. Tyrone

    Tyrone Active Member MEMBER

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    The woman is dangerously close

    to making me lose my senses
    it’s a matter of time
    before I exit my mind

    and tell her that everything
    I wanna know
    she helps me find

    Just in the way she loves
    her kids
    so openly, she’s just
    the way she is

    I admire her spirit, and the way
    it blossoms in her smile
    She’s got physical beauty
    longer than a country mile

    Her gifts run deeper than
    the eyes can see
    There are hidden
    treasures in her poetry

    The woman is dangerously close
    to making me break my oath
    She’s got a love at home, & my ***
    looking on…
    and I know she won’t do both

    Ty
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DAAAAAAAMN...
    if i was real stuck on myself
    i'd swear you were writing
    about me :D
    i love this flow
    you got it!
    -7 :spinstar:
     
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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    Haaaay Tyrone ... have we met before???
    how do you know soooo much about me ??!!!

    :wink:

    This is a beautiful peace ...
    thank you for sharing it here

    Please make yourself at home

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  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Yo TY

    this is that real **** dawg

    loved this piece no doubt

    but will she?
     
  5. Tyrone

    Tyrone Active Member MEMBER

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    Scribes

    thanks for the read. I've been coming through for months and y'all been blessin a brotha's soul with your excellent skillz. I knew the love was real up in heah.

    Naw, Street, mayne, the lady is intense; it's highly impossible and even more improbable, bro. But I can dream. :D

    Ty
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ty....


    what you talkin' bout Boo... i ain't got no kids. (lol)

    okay. okay. you weren't talking about me... but
    this was extra-sweet & i'm sure "she" would think
    so as well!! thanks for sharing your heart today!

    oh... & welcome to the family!!! :)

    OneLuv.
    SunShyne~
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ty

    ohhhhhhhh weeeeeeeee what a way to make an entrance!!!!!!!!!!!!! W E L C O M E



    One
     
  8. T

    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I C U Ty

    and this does speak of the deeper kinds of stuff. I'm feeling you and I know, from experience, staying inside some dreams is far better than realized fantasies.

    Good reading you.

    Peace

    T
     
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    Hello Tyrone

    sounds like a lady with integrity. Very nice piece.

    MadLove:heart: Coco
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HEY WELCOME TY.....

    MAN I FEEL YA ON THIS
    WE AS MEN CAN DREAM
    BUT BRUTHA U MADE A BANG N' BOOM!!!
    WELCOME TO THE PLAYGROUND OF DESTEE
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