Black Poetry : tonite* (INSPIRED BY THE EARTH)

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tonite
    i cried and she slept.
    she makes me feel like
    sean walks with a ladder in his back pocket--
    on high
    tonite--
    i felt that
    sean could stroll up to the half-moon and--
    devour it
    piece by piece--
    like
    an orange-wedge--
    tonite
    the sea smoothed
    and
    demanded that the breeze blow kisses
    to all edges of my mind--
    two became one and--
    one became the
    absolute
    beginning
    of
    infinity
    i became the earth--
    heart-pumping sea-fresh silky fluid--
    soul rejoining with the roots--
    *connected*
    and seperate all at the same time--
    *like that time it rained--
    and the sun still shyned*
    tonite
    i understood.
    i accepted.
    i predicated.
    i subjected--
    my mind stalled...arrested--
    trapped within guilty thoughts--
    x-convict to the abuse i have inflicted--
    yet connected just the same
    blaming ill-twisted lies
    on my present condition
    tonite
    i
    evolved.


    sean
     
  2. MzNappi

    MzNappi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man it s such joyous bliss to see u still doing yr thing
    i appreciate who you are brother

    sensitivity in a man is a beautiful
     
  3. SuNNiOne

    SuNNiOne Active Member MEMBER

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    this is very nice work. i enjoyed reading it.
     
  4. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh...

    [SIZE=huge]You just do it
    so well. I love, I love it,
    I love it! And, though,
    I can't always
    find the 'right' words
    to express how much
    I love your work, I
    know that you know
    how much I love it,
    anyway...:D :D :D
    [/SIZE]
     
  5. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all

    thank you all for reading...

    Nappi. thank you for reading and enjoying. glad the feeling's mutual!

    SuNNiOne. thank you and welcome. I'll be looking for your posts...:look:

    Maple. inspired by the earth and the maple, of course...lol
     
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